Hello again everyone! Ok so this whole haiku thing is very interesting. I gave it a whirl so we will see how I did.
Contemporary Haiku
His eyes red with fury
Blur of fists
Sparks behind my eyes.
I am not sure if I did that right but I tried. Here is a second one just for good measure.
Lips soft as silk
Tight embrace
Legs go weak.
Please let me know what you guys think. If I did it wrong let me know but I tried to follow it how it said to do it in our book. Thanks
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I think they're both great. I especially love the second one. I think anyone who has ever been in love has had those exact feelings. The way you put the words together made the passion leap out. Nice job!
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Thank you! I wasn't sure it would make sense.
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